This is my Writing it is could a Limerick its kinda a poem but with really funny rhymes we done this because it would be a fun activity this was very cool I love this what do you think a should improve or what did you like.
Kia ora Haki, Well done on creating two fantastic limerick poems! Limerick poems are a great form of poetry, and it is so awesome to see you having a go and making some yourself. I can imagine how tricky it must be to follow a theme and include rhyming words at the same time, so you should be exceedingly proud of your efforts! My favorite limerick out of the two you wrote would definitely be the first one. It was very funny to read about Kent and his troubles camping, and you did a great job following through with the storyline! Have you ever been camping? If so, where did you go and how long did you camp for? I really enjoy camping, although it is not something that I do regularly. I adore sitting in nature and watching all the birds and wildlife as they carry on with their daily lives, and listening to them chatter as I lay down to go to sleep. What is your favourite part of camping? Keep blogging, you’re doing an excellent job! Nga mihi
Kia ora Haki,
ReplyDeleteWell done on creating two fantastic limerick poems!
Limerick poems are a great form of poetry, and it is so awesome to see you having a go and making some yourself. I can imagine how tricky it must be to follow a theme and include rhyming words at the same time, so you should be exceedingly proud of your efforts!
My favorite limerick out of the two you wrote would definitely be the first one. It was very funny to read about Kent and his troubles camping, and you did a great job following through with the storyline!
Have you ever been camping?
If so, where did you go and how long did you camp for?
I really enjoy camping, although it is not something that I do regularly. I adore sitting in nature and watching all the birds and wildlife as they carry on with their daily lives, and listening to them chatter as I lay down to go to sleep.
What is your favourite part of camping?
Keep blogging, you’re doing an excellent job!
Nga mihi